He awoke in the morning to the sun’s harsh light soaked in sweat. his breathes came in short shallow gasps. his heart’s beating was at an incredible pace.
“what an intense dream…” he said to himself out loud as he stretched his tired aching body.
as he looked around his bedroom, he saw blood and chunks of flesh smeared all over everything.
he scrambled out of his bed when he saw the dead body of a woman laying in the bed next to him. her body appeared as though something had torn chunks out of her with its teeth.
Feeling as though he was about to vomit from the horrid sight in his bedroom, he went out into the hallway.
He spent several minutes fighting off the nausea. after which he went to the living room for the several joints he had left over from the party he had thrown the night before.
there they were on the coffee table but beside then was a letter with his name on it.
he lit a joint and he opened the letter. in his own handwriting and it read :
Good morning you killer you!!!
How are you feeling after that night of feasting upon her young, tender body? Did you know she trusted you completely up to the point where you began to really eat her? You had your way with that little girl before you killed her. Oh god that was fun, its a shame really you don’t remember…
You need not worry though, I’ll write to you again tomorrow morning…
“oh god.” he commented and then he smoked the rest of his weed.
he spent the whole day asking himself : what does this mean? did i do it? did i write this letter?
as the sun set the thoughts ran endlessly through his head, and he fell asleep…
he awoke the next morning covered in blood, the taste of it in his mouth.
on the coffee table before him was the broken body of a woman. a quick glance around the apartment revealed broken furniture covered in what could only be her blood…
upon her corpse was another letter. opening it, all the while fighting down waves of sickness, it read…
BOY that was fun! You know it is a shame that you don’t remember a thing of what happened…
But wait!!! Let me tell you what happened…
shortly after you awoke your stomach growled out its hunger.
so you washed up, got dressed, and went to your favorite bar : the night’s eye.
once there you went right on in…
oh it didn’t take you long to find a suitable candidate. her beauty struck you like a ton of bricks. black hair, palest of skins, greenish blue eyes, trim body, oh you could just eat her right up!!! (i love that pun don’t you?)
you went through the usual pleasantries. introduced yourself, bought her a few drinks, and all that.
oh things went well enough that within the hour you had her back at your apartment.
you made small talk for a while, but it stopped when you two started to kiss.
the pace quickly accelerated to the point you had her naked on the coffee table before you, and your hands roaming all over her soft, smooth skin. all the time you could hear her hearts beating ringing in your ears.
after a time, your hands ended up on her neck. as you began to choke her, she began to moan in pleasure. between gasps for air she managed to say, “tighter.”
happy to oblige, you did so. she started to moan a little louder, this crazy bitch was enjoying it!!!
so you let go. with a smile on her face she slapped you none to gently.
with an animalistic growl you went for her neck with your teeth. oh, they sunk in quite deeply and took hardly anytime at all for you to draw blood.
she screamed! mind you not out of pain but out of pleasure.
you lifted her upper torso with just your mouth, then pushed her back down with your hands, tearing out a chunk of flesh in the process.
too late she realizes this isn’t a game, an act, you actually mean to kill her.
she tried to run, but you held her tight so she couldn’t escape…
and well i’ll leave you guessing as to what happened next though you can most likely make some guesses about what happened do to your apartments condition…
I’ll talk to you later…..

16 comments ↓
this is a most touching story. so many memories were brought up in that bitter sweet story. i miss life. thank you. i am beki. i’ll be getting in touch. sweet dreams, love.
I injoyed reading this, and wish to see more in the future.
that was interesting
keep going
Damn…
That was awesome.I like that one. *S*
beautiful…love the imagery. brings up memories of some of my less-than-pleasant sexual encounters…
hope to see more along a similar train of thought soon
triana
Your best work yet babe. but then again you’ll always have the best stories. I do hope you will finish the story or at least to me.
Oh the sweet memorys it brings….
Always yours.
Your Shadow
Don’t you just hate waking up to mornings like that!
Seriously though, I enjoyed that…I presume you’ll be writing some more? You can’t just leave us all hanging…
deb
that was just absolutely cheeky *g*. i’ll be waiting on more installments, that is, if you plan on finishing it…
God…you could send this thing to a zine or write a real “multiple personality” short story or even a novel out of it and send to it to people. Oh bytheway, welcome to the club! The day you have enough others in your head to play poker, you are promoted to a “gold” member
enough to play poker……..i know some people that have had enough to play lacrosse………..(which by the way takes 40) and ive met most of the personalities of these people, quite an odd bunch…….
Wow…that reminds me of a distant Malkavian(i suppose u play/played VtM…i dunno i just supposed:) who ran a restaurant all by himslef. And the worst part was that the waitress Angelina was in love with the cook Beniccio (oh yes it ws an Italian restaurant)….hmmm talk about right hand and left hand you know

Never played, but I do play some other kinds of roleplaying…
But I have flipped through the rulebook before, and the Malkavians did seem like the kind to be for me
great story, i really like it.
Encore, encore! I loved it, wonderful story and I know all about MPD (multiple personality disorder) and according to one of the other comments i’m A “gold” member. Lol!
cool story. you write very well, will there be a part 2?
very much worth the read, good job!