She was pretty, he thought, tasty, too. He looked at the girl one last time. He then wiped the last of the blood off his face.
Devon then moved to the darker corner of the alley where he couldn’t be seen. He then looked at the girls’ dead body, which was in the moonlight. He ran his fingers through his hair sandy blond hair. He looked up into the sky and closed his eyes. He nearly jumped when he heard a girl all of a sudden screamed. He looked at the end of the alleyway without letting the girl see him. She was a girl around the age of the one he had fed on. She had long black hair and dark brown eyes. He watched her stumble with her bag. He saw she pulled out a cell phone and dialed a number. Probably calling an ambulance or something, he thought. He watched her put back her cell phone. She then stood up and started to walk into the alleyway. “Hello?” she said, “are you ok? He decided to let her live and then started to slowly slip away. But he was stunned by the dark haired girls beauty and didn’t pay attention to where he was walking and then kicked a can. The girl then screamed out loud. Devon then quickly fled while he had the chance….
To be continued…

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With a little, just a little, polish; that could have been stunning. You have a good written style, a talent for story telling.
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