Somewhere in the darkness… he lingered… the pain wasn’t bad here.
He figured he would just stay here a while and close his eyes and dream sweet dreams… he was pushing against time… but it was okay… he was free and no one could touch him here… so much for the great beyond… where is the light… no light… no music… music… he needed her voice… he wanted her body… he fought against the time… where is this thing called love when is it his time… where are the answers from the great beyond… where is his love… where is his future… time Is catching up with him… time is here… time to… no where to be found… there is the pain… why the pain… where is his love…where is the music???
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I liked it. I really did.
It reminded me of my own sorrow.
“Where is OUR happy ending?”
Keep it up.
Love, music, pain, time, dreams, touch…. Those are things that we all need.
I agree but with only 5 of the things needed pain, music, dreams, love and time. I say this because we need not to feel oneanother and still be happy
Your mind DESIRES touch, your body TREMBLES for touch, and your soul YEARNS to be touched… That is the nature for all humans, even though you weaker, inferior beings have that one advantage to do to us what we cannot do for ourself or for another of our brothers or sisters.
good stuff….me likies
i like way it was written…..keep writing….
pretty vehement, aren’t you mr. warlock?
we desire touch, much as an addict desires a drug. it is wanted, not needed. in theory, the same can be said of many emotional items as well… well, then we need one set or the other. mind over matter, matter to make us forget what lies within out minds. but aither one can compensate for the lack of the other
and what makes you so superior?