I want to know if anyone thinks my poetry is worth reading,I have included a couple short and unfinished ones. Please tell me how they are. Both are als untitled.
Sadness not gladness
knowing only tears
scars can show the pain
from all past years
These scars they will not ever heal
things I carry.
I cannot give but yet still live
I dare not to venture into the light
Because there is only good in the night
I care not for many things on this place
My feelings my own still a disgrace
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Anyones input is important and thanks.
~Dressed in black~
~Mortuos~