MindCurse - Part Four: Final

Sitting up in my bed, staring at the shadowy figure, I realized that this was not a dream,
this was all too real…

Finally overcoming my paralyzation, I hopped out of my bed and flew out of my room as fast as I could. I ran down the hall, and started to go down the stairs. I could feel my mind quickly fleeting, as if I was literally losing my mind. I tried to keep running from the darkness I could feel follow me, but I couldn’t see straight, I couldn’t think straight, I felt like I was lobotomizing as I tried to escape for my life.

And then it hit me! As all my thoughts were leaving me, one thought suddenly came to me. Of course, why didn’t I think of it before! I knew now what I had to do. I quickly ran into the kitchen and grabbed a knife. I then started slicing at my wrists, jabbing at my arms and chest, drawing as much blood as I could.

Finally, after a half dozen stabs in the torso, I collapsed to the floor. And then my mind returned to me. I had just killed myself. The absolute horror of what I’d just done was doubled when the evil that caused me to do it slowly entered the room and loomed over me. I wasn’t afraid of it anymore, as I was already about to die, but I was still terrified by what it had made me do, how it had controlled my mind to force my suicide. My last thought was of the sadistic demon as I looked up at it’s face. And my last sight was the grin on Monique’s face staring back at me.

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#1 Bottled-Vomit on 05.15.02 at May 15, 02 | 11:44 pm

They say love is a killer.

I like the way you write and the story had a good theme going to it. Keep it up.

Bottled-Vomit