mirror mirror

Mirror Mirror on my wall,
darkness lies inside us all

I look in the mirror and what do I see,
A strangers face staring back at me

Behind those sparkling big eyes of blue,
fragility, despair and darkness is there

Inside that smile so spunky and cute,
anger and rage is about to break through

Mirror mirror on my wall,
darkness lies inside us all

Okay, I’m brand new, I haven’t ever really written any poetry before, so please… coments are most welcome.
thanx