THINKING OUTLOUD

I wnna rip your fucking head off!
Everynight I dream of killing you.
I can perfectly see the knife peircing your skin.
I can see the blood running down your chin.

AM I SANE?
I choke you till your face turns blue.
I watch as your eyse roll back.
Your struggles lossen.
AW, WHAT’S THE MATTER BITCH?
AM I TOO LOUD FOR YOU?
SHUT UP LITTLE BITCH!
I beat you over the head, untill i hear your skull crack.
BLEED, FUCKER! BLEED!!
……………
I’m sorry teacher.
Was I screaming again?

7 comments ↓

#1 MaterialChrist on 03.29.03 at Mar 29, 03 | 1:44 am

cool :)

-mer

#2 blacklight on 03.29.03 at Mar 29, 03 | 6:36 pm

i didn’t like it that much. lacked finish i guess

#3 MaterialChrist on 03.29.03 at Mar 29, 03 | 6:40 pm

haha.. yeah.. sorry fangsthatkill.. trying to be nice.. ur other was better.

-mer

#4 FANGSthatKILL on 03.30.03 at Mar 30, 03 | 12:40 am

well guyz-
this poem i wrote is accually about a person. a person who once was my best friend and well… u get the picture. sry its not as good as my other one.

-FANGSthatKILL-

#5 Mors on 03.30.03 at Mar 30, 03 | 6:26 am

um, it seems much to like that old eminem song. kim, was it? or that other one which was a lot like it on the second album? or the first? hell i don’t know. coincidence?

#6 Es ist Bridgette on 03.31.03 at Mar 31, 03 | 5:45 pm

It’s called Kim. I know it does sound like that. I read it a couple days ago but I didn’t have username and so on yet and that’s what I wanted to say. I like it.

#7 Es ist Bridgette on 03.31.03 at Mar 31, 03 | 6:21 pm

Oh yeah sorry. Love it. mors dude we have a lot in common I don’t know if you read this post or story ever again but I want you to e-mail me. I read one of your posts and you said Cradle of Filth didn’t you I can’t find any one else but my cousin who listens to that and I listen to that all the time. I’m an e-mail recipient to their website but anyway that doesn’t matter my bells gonna ring soon bye. e-mail me please anti_nova87@hotmail.com