Bloody love

This is my first time writing here. I’d value any ones opinions. So tell me what you think šŸ™‚
Bastian walked almost with out sound down the cold, gray pavement, althought his black menacing looking boots were heavy. His shoulder length black hair blew in the ice cold wind. His skin was white , almost ghost like but crimson pasted his cheecks from the wind.

He wore a long black trench coat over his black fish net shirt and bondage pants. His blue eyes pierced like cold steel through all the black.
He arrived at her house early, standing out side her window. As if mentally beconing her to come to the window so he could see her face. He rang the door bell.
Catiya came to the door. His once emtionless face now slightly grew warmer and with an evil smirk walked in. He slowly wrapped his chilled arms around her tiny waist, pulling her closer to him. Her parents were out of town for the week and Catiya wanted to take full advantage of it. He studied her amazing body as she walked up the stairs in front of him. She wore tight black bondage pants with a blood red shirt.
He took her hand as she led him to her bed room. He loved Catiya so much and knew that she was a virgin, but the innocence about her made him want her even more. He had many a time imagined being inside of her. He on the other hand had many sexual encounters, but knew this would be something to hold on to.
For the first time in the 12 months they had been together this was the first time Catiya had seemed almost fearless and had a cat like glare in her green eyes. She knelt on her bed and stared up at Bastian. She played with her long brown hair, twisting each strand around her black nails. She licked her lips and looked over at her dresser and got up. She put in a movie while Bastian layed down on the bed and took off his boots.
They layed there together occasionally looking up to watch bits of the movie but then back down at each other as they kissed each other. Finally, knowing how he could get her to do anything he wanted, climbed on top of her. She looked over at his arms that now pinned down her wrists. They were covered in scars. Bastian had a passion for blood and cutting himself. She had seen them before and thought nothing of them.
He now straddled her. He took one hand off of her wrist and reached around to graze the blade he had wedged in his bondage pants. He then returned his attention to her. Leaning down to kiss her he could see the fear return to her eyes. He liked that about her. He continued to kiss her and put one of his still cold hands under her shirt. It made her nipples hard under her black bra. He sat her up and took off her shirt. knowing he’d have to do all the work. he didnt mind.
he took off her bra and began to suck and lick her nipples ever so slowly teasing her and every now and then depriving her of something she would be feeling for the first time. he unbuttoned her pants and slid them off to reveal and black thong. He slid that off too and began to lick her inner thigh. teasing her yet again. he then ate her out. sucking her clit and fingering her. she began to moan. he knew he was good at pleasing women.
he stopped and returned to kissing her and took her hands to his clothes and made her take them off. His metal chains clanged together as she took off his shirt. He stood up and took his own pants off. She watched his every move as he came closer to her. He leaned back against the bed and pulled her head over to kiss him.
he slowly moved her head towards his dick. she began to give him head. sucking and stroking him. though she was a beginner he enjoyed her. he pulled her off before he could cum.
He got on top of her and spread her legs. He grabbed his dick in his hands and teased her clit with the head of his dick. Making her moan. He slowly slid inside of her. Deeper and deeper he went.
He stopped moments later and stuck his finger in her along with his dick. He pulled out a finger full of blood. He looked at her and she told him to keep going. He slowly started to fuck her, getting more intense with each thrust. She moaned as her pain turned into pleasure. He rubbed her tits as he thrusted deep inside her.
Kissing her and looking into her eyes every now and again. He then remember the blade. He pulled it off of her dresser and dragged it down her shoulder. A small line of blood pooled on her porcelain like skin. He licked it off as she moaned and begged for more. She grabbed the blade and turned it on him. He knew she wanted to please him so he pulled her hand with the blade towards his back. She ran it down a small section of his back. He could feel it and he moaned loudly. she trailed her hands through his blood. and smiled. He realized he was close to cumming and again fucked her harder.
She ran her nails down his back pulling him closer and deeper into her. He came moments later and moaned loudly and heavily and continued until Catiya came. She screamed and pulled him against her. Their now hot flesh was covered in sweat , blood and cum. He fell on top of her and brushed the hair from her face. He pulled her close nibbled her ear and said ” i love you” she returned the gesture and collapsed in her pillow underneath him.