Goodbye My Love

Hey all, I am new here and i just wanted to try my hand at this. I guess i have always wanted to write but have been to timid to do so. Any comments welcome.

Life is so evil and oh so twisted
As I feel it drain from me
I dont think I’ll miss it

Sitting here waiting to die
I’m writing you a letter
To tell you goodbye

My love for you
has turned into a noose
Left here hanging
Til I turn blue

Feeling faint and very weak
I drift into…
A permanent sleep

Goodbye My Love