She could hear his words ringing in her ears,”You actually thought I lovedyou,aww you did,how sweet.I could never love someone like you,”looking at her though eyes full of hatrid while straddling his whore
.”Someone like you,what could he have meant by that,”she began thinking.”I loved him,bought him things,did what he said,took it when he hit and yelled at me;and he repays me by fucking some whore,saying those dreadful words to me.”Drawing designs in the pool of blood that belonged to him and his whore,she replayed the events that had taken place that night in her head.She had just come home from work,she heard some noises coming from their bedroom so like any normal person would do,she ran in there to see what was going on.She opened the door and witnessed with her own eyes what he had been doing while she was at work.She saw her with her head tilted back moaning and him basically fucking her brains out.She managed to get out,”what do you think your doing?” between sobs.He stopped for a second and replied,”getting what you don’t give me,” then went back to what he was or should i say who he was doing.”How could you do this to me,you said you loved me,” and he replied the words she hated most in the world to hear,”You actually thought I loved you,aww you did,how sweet.I could never love someone like you.”Hearing this she collapsed into the floor,sobbing uncontrollably.”Get out of here now and I may reconsider punishing you for interupting my sex time,”he screamed to her.She slowly and shakely crawled out of the room.She sat in the hallway and cried for a bit.When she finally gained enough strength to stand up,she stood up and went to the kitchen cabinet and grabbed the gun they had bought earlier that week.She then walked back into the bedroom where he and his whore were still going at it.She watched this horrific site for a momemt then shouted,”Are you going to continue doing this to me?!” Once again he stopped and replied,”of course I will i can do whatever I want to you remember,now get out before I really get mad and hurt you like i did the other night!”After hearing this she shot him right in the head,killing him instantly.His corpse fell on top of his whore,and she started screaming.She then shot his whore,killing her instantly as well.She dropped the gun to her feet,and collapsed into the floor,where she continues to sit.She slowly drifted back into reality and began to weep again.Hands covered in the his and his whore’s blood she began to wonder what would happen next.Weeping from fear and the site she had created took the gun into her hands,placed the tip into her mouth,and pulled the trigger simply to avoid the guilt and punishment she would have to deal with later.
Please tell me what you think.This is my first time writing anything other than erotica.