I come from a diffrent world. where rainy dayz are beautifull, where blood runs in the streams, rivers and oceans. where the sun freeze’s your eyes. where the moon burns you, where kiss’s are deadly, and love is posion.
I come from the DarkSide. A world that has gone Very very wrong. where all suffer, But of all, I suffer the most. cause I was born there. All the others where sent there, they are kastout’s. because they where diffrent. Because the things that make them special, are what You Fear most. these people are what you call monsters. I grew up with them. Got there Speed, strength, eye sight, they made me what I am today. Your worst Fear.I look like u, talk like you, But I’m not you. I’m stronger, Smarter, faster, Better. I’m a version of them and you. I’m what every thing fears. I make mothers Cry, Because There sons Won’t becomming home Today.
The Childern Cry, Because Daddy Was killed Right in FRont of them.little children. They do not Fear me because they Just don’t understand. I take them from this world. to a better one, called Excitoia. it’s a a place where love fills the air. where every one and thing is Accpected. where the sun all ways shines. where it’s always warm. when the air smells like spring rain. you can see the moon in daylight. a beautifull place. only the pure can stay here. And some how, I can come here, But I don’t belong here. I belong out there. Cause I’m a out kast. I was born to kill and destroy. thats all I have, THats all I will ever have. I’ve always been heartless, vicous, cold Hearted, dangerous. the REal me. I’m not good or bad, But I am good and Bad. theres no others like me. thats a good thing. so they don’t have to suffer like me. every day I live, Every breath I take, hurts. and gets more painfull as I continue to live, is it normal to suffer like this? I think not, I’m a hudge mistake that the world has made, I Destroy 100s of lives away. theres nothing out there like me. have questions, But answers seem to disapear.I must return to my home. my deadly home, I’m the only one who can stand the pain and posion. but why only me? I live alone, While my FRiends and memories Die away. I’m alone, And Always will be. I’m not mean to be loved, Or known. All those who Seen me, Have died. All those who loved me, Have left. I’m alone once again.

As the words behind the lines are so clear, I respect an open mind. As well as those who are or who have been through what I have in my past.
Interesting layout.
hi i like wat u wrote its cool im eugene
i loved the idea and the ending
but i think that u need to change something in the words in the start
-EvilShinji, waiting for your next works ;]
Can you give me directions to this Excitoia? It’s believable. I enjoyed it a lot. I was born in hell and everything opened up and I was put on the earth when I was about five. I became living hell on earth. I remember that day perfectly……I feel so close to you but I am so far away.
-Lieben Sie Bridgette