lovepain? I don’t know..

Here follows a small piece I wrote some time ago..
Please tell me what you think.

Oh angel of beauty/queen of the night
Seduce me throughoutly/and cover my sight
Awaken my creature/arouse him at last
Take all of my sadness/and bury the past
Oh cloud my mind/take away all my pain
Untill you leave me/while I cry out in vain.

By Draught_arisen

20 years old.. Living in a city, in wich I am the only goth-looking man. Everybody I talk to thinks I am a satanist, merely on account of my dark clothes and eyes. But I care not, for I am who I am and nothing or no one is gonna change that. P.s. Should anyone read this and wonder what the hell I want with the army? That's just it, in my country it is not optional, you can either go there, or move to whatever part of the country needs someone to clean their toilets and the likes..