The Dark Alley Chapter 1

It was only 8 o’clock, but the night seemed to last an eternity. She walked down the darkened alley to a red neon sigh that read”The bleeding Heart”. It was another cold night where she lived and as always she curced the coldness. Katie miller had always hated the cold and she knew she always would.
She’d been trying to get to a party her friend was having, but got lost. katie didn’t have a car, so she had taken the bus and must have gottin off at the wrong stop. She was hoping
“The Bleeding Heart” would have someone who would help her. She was exhausted from walking. She was glad when she finally made it to the door.
Katie opened the door and went in. No one looked up when she went in. Most of the men and women were playing darts or pool, or sitting at the tables drinking and talking. It was dark except of a red light in the middle of the bar. The pooltables had lights, but the lights only reach to the edge of the tables.
At 23 Katie was only five three and 110lbs. She had blond hair and a midnight blue eye and a emerald green eye. Katie finaly walked to the counter. the man behind the counter looked about six five and very muscular. he had black hair and almost black eyes.
“What can I get you?” he asked in a nice sothing voice.
“I was wondering if you knew were elm street is?”
” If you wait five minutes I can point you in the right direction. I’ll buy a drink for you while you wait.”
He left and came back with a red drink. it looked weird, but it tasted like a little bit of heven in its own way. When he finally came back again he walked her to the door and they walked down the alley in silence. Next thing Katie knew she was doubled over in pain. Then her vison blured and she fell into unconsciousness.

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