THINKING OUTLOUD

I wnna rip your fucking head off!
Everynight I dream of killing you.
I can perfectly see the knife peircing your skin.
I can see the blood running down your chin.

AM I SANE?
I choke you till your face turns blue.
I watch as your eyse roll back.
Your struggles lossen.
AW, WHAT’S THE MATTER BITCH?
AM I TOO LOUD FOR YOU?
SHUT UP LITTLE BITCH!
I beat you over the head, untill i hear your skull crack.
BLEED, FUCKER! BLEED!!
……………
I’m sorry teacher.
Was I screaming again?

By FANGSthatKILL

uh.. fuck everyone!

7 comments

  1. haha.. yeah.. sorry fangsthatkill.. trying to be nice.. ur other was better.

    -mer

  2. well guyz-
    this poem i wrote is accually about a person. a person who once was my best friend and well… u get the picture. sry its not as good as my other one.

    -FANGSthatKILL-

  3. um, it seems much to like that old eminem song. kim, was it? or that other one which was a lot like it on the second album? or the first? hell i don’t know. coincidence?

  4. It’s called Kim. I know it does sound like that. I read it a couple days ago but I didn’t have username and so on yet and that’s what I wanted to say. I like it.

  5. Oh yeah sorry. Love it. mors dude we have a lot in common I don’t know if you read this post or story ever again but I want you to e-mail me. I read one of your posts and you said Cradle of Filth didn’t you I can’t find any one else but my cousin who listens to that and I listen to that all the time. I’m an e-mail recipient to their website but anyway that doesn’t matter my bells gonna ring soon bye. e-mail me please anti_nova87@hotmail.com

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